Polish it. That's all.
You obviously spent a lot of time on this thing, and it shows.
Stylistically, sticks. But you can make them look better. Take a look at some of the more prevalent Stick Shorts and see what they do.
But what you did was fine. And mildly entertaining.
(Only mildly though. Fun song. And memories of Shrek!)
Keep it up.
The ending was perfect!!!!
You dun good! Get better drawing skills, and you'll have a frontpage worthy animation!
Myeh, the drawing was poor. That's my only complaint.
he he he
i liked it... although the graphics weren't that impressive.... I like the music you used... I have it too.... it's from shrek to... featuring "Put it in C minor" ^^