Pretty decent job, but...
I can understand where you're trying to go with this, and your concept is great. I'm glad someone stepped up and made a game like this. But it could've been much better.
Try practicing a bit more on your drawings skills with Flash. It looked pretty weak, some of the scenes and characters, and it got boring really quickly.
The music doesn't even fit with the setting, either. Needless to say, it wasn't the best game in the world, but nice attempt ;)