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Reviews for "perhaps its fun..."

Needs work

I protected this, but when it gets through, I think you should edit some things, or at least improve in a 3rd part:
- The sound is indeed crappy. Way too much bass, it sounds very hollow and distorted. I think the whole thing might need a different song, without vocals. This takes away the focus and besides, I fucking hate it :)
- The screen is blank several times, that really slows things down. Link the parts together and maybe have more "line evolutions" going on at the same time, that would really increase the replayability. Work to a climax of some kind. Way more than this will not be too much.

Good luck!

Legend responds:

Why do you hate the song? Oh well, thanks for the reveiw. I left some parts blank so it wouldn't get so repetative, which I failed at.

pretty cool

fun to watch....it seemed like a lightshow

Legend responds:

thanks, A light show, hmm cool.

I thought it was alright

It was alright. But sadly, line movies... they are done far too much! No offence! some are good. Yours in particular was. YOu probably should have done a better job finishing the movie. Seeing as how it ends in the MIDDLE of the song. I gave you a good score, and I hope that you get onto the portal. Good luck Mooney Mccracken

Legend responds:

thanks, Once my speakers get fixed ill see what you mean about ending abruptly

Quite good

This flash was a little better than the first one. Again, lots of lines, but that's what I usually see on a FBF flash anyway. Still, there were drawings of several things that were good. Nice animation in this flash as well with the FBF animation. :) The sound, the music didn't me too much, but at least the music was at a reasonable quality to give the filesize of the flash quite big, but not too big. Nice work.

-Bahamut

Legend responds:

Thanks again for the reveiw, I'm glad it interested you in some parts. My last 10 reveiws have all been from elite guard members, hehe, except the one from ramagi. The third one isn't as good though.

Nice Job

<Good Points>
The animation was okay, graphics were good, good song, it was long, some violence, and the house blowing up made me laugh.

<Improvement>
The animation could be so much faster. It was pretty slow in some parts. Also the replay button doesn't work.

4/5 homer8722