Reviews for sw civil wars ep 1 edited

[ConGelko]

I'll say it again cause it needs to be!

Ok, if you are going to make a Star Wars animation, you need to get your story straight. Malak and Revan lived some 4,000 years before The Clone Wars so they can't be in a time period with Clones, which were not around until Episode II. You have to stick with the Tales of the Jedi/Sith War/KOTOR era, the prequel era, or the Galactic Civil War. You can't ala'carte this! With that said, decent graphics, the sound is way too loud and Yoda can't even be understood.

[BobaMatt]

Urgh

You fixed some things from last time, like the trooper that endlessly strokes the map, but the medical droid still seems stolen from somewhere else, and your Jedi character design was completely ripped off a superior Star Wars piece on this site called Transitions.

Plotwise...well don't make Star Wars movie unless you're a Star Wars nerd, or you do research, or Star Wars nerds will tear you a new one. As I said before, the last time you submitted this, playing through KOTOR once doesn't make you an expert.

1) Revan lived about 4000-5000 years before the Clone Wars.
2) Even if he found a way to remain alive, he would not fight on Dooku's side, as he was reformed at the end of Knights of the Old Republic. (Sure, you can choose the Dark Side ending, but the canon ending is the light side one.)
3) Clone medics don't have red crosses on them. Nice touch, anyway.
4) Something tells me having another Jedi in the family would be something of a big deal in the Skywalker household.
5) Yoda makes no sense in this piece.

[NakedScratch]

Blammage material. Has potential tho.

This COULD be alot better if you changed your jedi character to a more original design, did not steal characters from Transitions, and didnt make it so annoying. Most talking grated on me and made me want to slit my wrists.

[Viris69]

hey jackass

you posted this film yesterday you ass hole and it was blammed for sucking ass

TheQookieMonster responds:

jackass? and sucking ass? What the fuck are you saying, people beged me to fix the sound its called 'EDITED' retard go fucking get a life stupid kid and no it didnt get blammed, sorry loser