This made me laugh repeatedly.
It's just hilarious. I love you.
This made me laugh repeatedly.
It's just hilarious. I love you.
Pretty good
Not as good as Mechanical Hazard. The beat didn't really change at all which made it kind of boring. I liked the vocals go. I'll give it a 7.
It's ok..
It is not as good as mechanical hazard. The tune is good, but the vocals got in the way, and were really scratchy/fuzzy. And as the people before said, it was kinda boring.
in all honesty
it could have been better. it was a bit too slow for my taste and there is a lot of scratchy/fuzzyness that im hearing, like if the instrament was too high on volume but its not.
its not a bad song, if you got rid of the scratchyness it would sound a lot better
Very nearly enough...
A good basic concept. Needs a little fine tuning, but I like it. I think that perhaps an instrumental interlude thrown in the mix would really catch the ear. The effects on your voice are a nice touch...maybe overdone just a smidge. The song carries its message well, though, and the effects, pitch and background deliver the message just that much better.
7/10, well written.