Nice build up
I love how the melody pitchbends, but Im finding myself listening for a snare that doesnt exist. Kick is nice but it cud be punchier. If I were you I would put slight echo on that melody. Great job though. Parts of the song sound sound empty though, fil those parts up with some pads and white noise
Well put good sir. This old piece had a lot of room for work, but the computer it was produced on could hardly even open the project it is so slow, so I had to stop where I was and put out a blehhh song. Cheers!
well
I love this. I just got into jumpstlye music, and this is just what I have been looking for. To be honest, although I review massive amounts of dance/techno/trance, etc kind of music on here, I really do not know all that much about the creating of said music, so I can not give you an in depth review full of criticisms and all that. As that is, I think this song is really well done and sounds great. Good Job
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FRS
Thanks man, your reviews are always so kind!
Left 4 Robicide?
I like it alot. Makes me think of left 4 dead, but its a robot zombie apocalypse. The drum riff at 1:10 brought me back to marching band. Was pretty amusing
Yea sorry for the corny sounding african drums. I can't have a song without a percussion solo though.
sup dude!
hey i just joined rithum and thats how i found this, but ive been here longer
i like the first sorta synth that comes in thats not a bass, you know
dude those hi-hat arpegiations are awesome, pretty cool technique you did to get them to sound arp like that, cuz i know thats not the normal way for arping
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If any of that makes sense, congratz
i freaking hate that riff at 1:10, its just bad dude, sorry, my advice would be add some reeverb on somthing to make it have a more open feel, plus you should have a synth in there to do actual notes instead of just precussives
anyways, this song lacks some of the stuff i love in music like this, you need the epic-ass saw leads, your kick should trail on into the next kick, thats more of a personal taste thing though, i just like it when the kicks all trail together
PLUS it needs a better ending
it all could use alot of work, but this might not really be your style, so idk
hey dude hit me up on rithum, cuz i have no freakin clue how that site works
peace out dude
SessileNomad
First off your review is awesome. it's nice to actually get criticism. I hear a lot of either "this is awesome" or "this sucks" haha.
The riff you don't like is a percussion solo. I am obsessed with percussion and this is mostly just for me but its nice to know other people opinions of it. I think it's kinda clever although I would have prefered some better african drums then that standard fl studio clicky crap
I was considereing adding reverb or maybe even another layer to that main melody but i decided to keep a minimalistic feel which makes it easier to put out a really delicious mix. Notice any clipping or out of place volumes or badly done effects? I am a tech whore basically haha.
I used a shorter punchier kick to try to appeal to jumpstyle dancing more although I also like what your talking about the meshing of the kicks. I give a little taste of that with the transition using 3 16th note kicks put together and the reverse kick that leads into every other measure.
The epic saw in the beginning was originally in the main melody too but it was really hard for me to EQ properly so I dropped it cuz it sounded amateur as hell.
My ending sucks!!!!! I am an intro guy and I have always sucked at outros. Maybe something I should work on.
Anyways thanx for the awesome review I am gonna go return the favor and of course help on rithum.
Cheers!
Great percs!
hey love the track,
Wish the bass at 1:40 came in sooner.
The percs are awesome very well done. the track fits jumpstyle to perfection.
personally I would have became more crazy with that sound that came in at 30 seconds.
Let me know if you want me to remix this sometime for you!
Cheers great track!
Thanks bud