It was pretty good
It was nice but it was too short. also try making the blood spurt out after they get stabed, and make the enemies a little more involved, like making them have more reactions. I don't mean like them doin matrix karate chops or anything like that.
ahaha yeah like i said in that other review :)
well yeah... i was thinking of making them trying to struggle to get out... but eh.. if you would have told me in the 1st one i would have done it... because alot of people gave me ideas and stuff for the 2nd one....
-Justin :) so yeah in the 3rd one ill try to make it longer.. but its FBF so its harder and its hard to make it long...
Yep
Nice job, but the guys he attacks need to react at least a little, it's like they're totally numb or something.
well.. mate... how about... I go over to your house and like with my knife sneak up on you in the dark... lets see if you like go all karate chop matrix on me... no you'll scare your self shitless... its the truth... we all know
-Justin :)
thanks for voting
and dont get all mad like " Oh No He Didnt! -snaps- "
Super!! well.. not super, but good
I saw the first part it was good, better than the secon one. it was more combat in it. how do u make those guns man???
ahahah we just good mate
-Justin ;)
Pretty Average
Well, first off, I want to commend you guys for working on flash at such a young age. Most 13 year olds could only dream of making something like this. As for the flash, it wasn't bad. The animation was a bit choppy, and the graphics were rather simple, but clean enough. The major problem I saw was how the violence was animated. Getting stabbed by a knife would produce a much larger bloody mess. You should have animated a spurt of blood as he got stabbed, and put a little bit more blood afterwards. Also, try animating the stabbing motion a bit faster. It seemed like your character was just poking his enemies with the knife instead of jabbing it into them. Pretty good stuff nonetheless. You dudes have potential.
yeah its FBF so yeah some frames made it look jumpy yeah my mates give me like advice and help me along the way and yeah im glad you liked it...
yeah i dont care what people think of my age im 13 so what but i animate better then most people!
-Justin :) yeah the knife part.... was like pokey instead of a rough jab throught the back or something but in the 3rd im ganna spend alot more time... instead of just a week or 2...
thanks for the advice! :)
Couple Things
Night is spelt N-I-G-H-T, also the art is not exactly stolen but is pretty clost to something else I saw. And if it is where you got it from then it could have been alot better. Next the reason for the low violence rating.
Middle of the night, no one else around, some one touches your shoulder... you stand there waiting to die.... dont do anything... "Perhaps" you say to yourself "I'm hust to lazy to turn around and not die... or perhaps im paralyzed from the tip of my hair down to my feet." If you get my drift they should at least turn around or jump or be alerted in anyway shape or form. It's just natural human behaivor. Other then that... sorry for the long reveiw, could have been less zoomed in and more well... action. Do better next time and keep practicing.
ahahah im not really up to spelling
and the other shit... eh
-Justin