sweetness
If the whole album is like this, oh man. The whole song sounds good man. Guitar tone is awesome. Cymbals are kind of loud, but might just be my speakers.
Anyway, the chorus. I agree that the chorus at :57 has good melody. I think it does sound kind of thin though, like there is not enough going on. Maybe try a melody with your voice, like multiple tracks. Something like that. Sorry I didn't have much else to help with, this is a good song.
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Thanks dude, glad you dig it!.
A full Album !!!
as for the help
the sync between the guitar and the drums are realy good, and you made a well played solo
as for the vocals: the clear vocals of the chorus are excelent, very well placed in the song
as for the grunting vocals, it felt like your voice was fading a bit when you did them in the song, or maybe they instrumentals had a much bigger volume than them, but that a tune you have to work a little on,.
as the main singing like from 00:19 to 00:44 were fine, but somehow it sounded like you were holding you voince too much, I mean like trying to make it sound something between grunting and clear, I favor to clear vocals a little more on this but the shouting still rules(BTW Tom Araya) I mean with a little more natural voice
as always another great work, well what songs are the other 3?
I'm pro for the Brazilian girl with the guitar thing, and tell Kupia there is some good metal bands in Brazil like Angra, Shaman (both progressive metal) as you said Sepultura, Sarcófago (Sarcophagus), and we have Max Cavalera, it is not only Carnival and soccer here, we still have some kick ass bands...and fans
This was a rough mix, dude. I just rushed through the vocals to give the ideas for the choruses, so I could tell which one to use. But thank you for your feedback!
Sweet.
I would use both choruses man but that's just me. Maybe add some more harmonies on the vox for the chorus 2 part. Killer song btw
Haha, I guess there is no rule against two different chorus melodies. haha. Thanks Dudeface.\m/
Also, checka da emails...I think I stalked you. haha
Fuck yeah!
Dude, this sounds awesome!
For the intro/verse, the opening riff is great as always, and I really like the overlapping screaming/talking you did there, and then it's awesome when it's just solo screaming for the last phrase of the verse and the lyrics involve screaming, great stuff!
For the chorus(1 and 2), those vocals are incredible! Has a kind of Killswitch Engage feel to it, it's always great to hear someone who not only can scream and whatnot, but then turn around and sing something great like that, sounds fucking amazing dude. Also, the transition from the first chorus is pretty brutal, and the one after the second chorus has a cool change of pace as well.
For the blah, blah, stuff, solo, maybe it's just me, but I feel that the talking part when it breaks down could be more heavy, not like riffwise or anything, but maybe you could lean more towards shouting rather than just talking, dunno though, maybe it's just a matter of preference there. The solo on the other hand is fucking awesome, nice tapping! The breakdown during the solo sounds great as well!
The only thing I would consider tweaking in my opinion is the talking part after the second chorus that I mentioned before, but besides that it sounds spot-on! It's great to hear that you're coming out with an album, too! Are you gonna be releasing the album on iTunes or anything like that? I'd love to buy it when it's complete and give it a listen! If you want any more feedback on any of the other album tracks I'll be more than happy to help you out there, hope the album recording process is going well for you!
Thanks for the super kind words, dude. Thats awesome. This is just a rough up of the song. I actually just recorded the vocals just before putting it on newgrounds. I've redone everything. Especially the talking part, that was a 'made up on the spot" thing. My focus here was to get peoples opinions on the different choruses. I'm not going to leak which one I used either ;).
I was going to release ALL the songs on newgrounds at this quality, and sell the c.d. of it all done through a studio. However, the release here on newgrounds may not come to fruition. And here is why:
There have been a lot of FANTASTIC artists that have been here on Newgrounds but discouraged by the vote/rating system. Regardless of the score, it does directly effect their exposure..
It's basically a slap in the face to the artists that work hard to provide newgrounds with the best ORIGINAL, free music ANYWHERE on the internet. SO these artists are slapping newgrounds back in the face, by NO LONGER providing their music for free, and leaving the site. I want to show my support for them, as their loss here is greater than people think. So I may no longer submit anything that I've really worked hard on, to newgrounds either. Don't get me wrong, I have a lot of support and fans because of newgrounds. So only the people who have added me to their favorites will still get a "newground quality" cut of the C.D. for free, but that will be handled privately. :D
The audio portal isn't a joke. It shouldn't be treated like one.
NICE!!!
Awesome melody...The vox kick ass...and they're not roaming all over the place if you know what i mean. if this is a rough mix of it, i'd love to hear the real song when it's done. it's like a fusion of 2 badass bands making one badass song. You're good man! seriously, why aren't you famous? You Xeno and Metaljonus should be outraged that shitty bands make it when real talent gets swept under the carpet! keep rockin out bro!
Thanks dude. Hopefully I can get this album done soon. :) Working on it. Thanks for the kind words and support!!\m/