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Reviews for "God Warriors"

Decent Effort however....

I think that for long movies it would be better if you had a scene selection or fast forward option. Another way would be to cut it into parts. Otherwise even the most engrossing flash can be a tedious and boring when it starts getting to 10 mins long.

I also think that story is very good. The voice acting could use more work. But maybe you just don't know any girls? If you do know girls, please get them to do the girls voices. Also, remember that the SPEED at which you talk is very important. For more serious scenes, TALK SLOWER. It builds suspense.

All in all, I think it is a fairly good effort. Just keep working at it. Especially two those things I talked about. Good luck!

CheveLoco responds:

hmmm...the movie does have an scene selection...0_0

and there's no girls to give voice too...:S

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you just ...earght. Ok listen the animation was pretty basic and there where alot of pauses. In this flash people move at light speed I mean one second some guy is one the ground and then hes in the air.Also remember the long pauses, well I know you want this to feel epic but can't people think fast one their feet, In real life if it where like that a normal conversation would be 2 hours for example: "what are we gonna doo with the armor" *about 12 socond pause*
"we will just tell him it was destroiyed"
for these reasons this flash animation gets a vote that was once apon a time a 3 out of 5(yes that is my vote people keep asking me to stop my stupid grading sistem but im not grading im voting)

CheveLoco responds:

do u know how much 12 seconds really are in a short movie?...it would be ok for a 2 hour movie but you can't slow down the pace like that....12 seconds of just silence?...not a great idea to create suspense...it would just make the movie longer for no reason...

look at the file size...how big you think this would be if more animation was added to it?..it would exceed the size limit and wouldnt be able to submit it..

It needs more voilence, but it's a good flash.

God Warriors isn't that bad. I hope to see God Warriors II come soon with Explict voilence.

This could turn into something great

This was very good. the flawes are that there wasnt much action going on and it looks very DBZish you should alter your style somwhat and include some action in ep2

Good

Pros: Drawings are very nice
Cons: Mouth animation wasnt very good, there was little body animation, and the story-line is a little too anime for my liking.