very nice
Very nice intro. i liked the piano's tone. it builds very nice into the main part. the snare roll didnt seem to rise in volume consistently which was kinda wierd. When the hard style bass comes in I think it needs more bass presence and maybe just a little less kick, just opinion. when you doubled the dude saying go or somthing with that upbeat cymbal it too much presence, too up front and in your face. All of the automation sweeps at the end were coolbut they seemed to not go back and forth consistently. like it would be in the middle of getting softer, then stop getting softer, then continue. I dont really know what was goin on. Also, how did you do that pitch sweep thing at 59 seconds?
So, Great start, lots of potential, I wanna see this finished =)