Good.
The graphics and animation were great, but the ending was kind of bad, and I didn't like the music. But other than that great.
Reviews for "Black and White battle"
NEO666x0 responds:
oh well I tryed...
=)
Nicely done! I liked the music very well and the flash altogether was great. If you could make it a bit more smoother though, I'm sure it'd be a lot better. Keep up the good work!
NEO666x0 responds:
Thanks alot!
Wonderful frame by frame animation !
Yeah this must have taken some time uh ? ;)
The animation was really nice. Having it in black and white was a good choice if you don't think you have the habilities to paint your drawings. It added to the the atmosphere.
I only gave you a 3 but it is more of a 3.5. The reason I didn't gave a 4 to this is the abrupt ending. The music ended in a wrong way so it hurts your cartoon. Especially since the end gives us our last impression of it :(
Also I didn't like the arms of the guys while they were running. They were moving in a weird way. This is especially true for the scene where the camera is in front of the character. The armes look like weird triangles trying to grow out of the body. My suggestion ? Try to make them move less instead.
The sound effects were well timed but I would have loved to hear breathing and footsteps. Take a mic, go outside and tape your sounds !
All in all, this is the kind of cartoon I like to see here. I don't know if you made them on Toon Boom or Flash but it ended up great.
Keep up the good work !
NEO666x0 responds:
This may be the best comment I have gotten thank you very much you would be a good moderator for NG.
that was pritty gd
you have some real talent there i like your style the animation was gr8 an the music seemed 2 fit the action well , i thought you could have made the ending a bit longer tho , like a suspence when they both lie motionless on the ground . well done :)
possibly in the works of greatness......
Man, I have to say that was a great fight sequence I mean the art was a bit low res but , the idea still came through and it was a good one......I can see a lot potential for your future works......