Reviews for Death - Inevitable

[misterjoe]

That was a good for your first,

most first submissions are really bad and end up getting blammed but this was definately a passable attempt. It's clear that you have a good grasp of flash and this is a sturdy foundation to begin with.
Put a bit more imagination into your next work though, try to give even simple concepts like this a unique twist. Steer clear of predictability and try to surprise your audience with something they won't expect.
Your artwork is good, but this would look better if you experimented with some shadows, sometimes it looked a bit too bright and breezy when it should have been dark and moody.

[N0b0c0p]

Good

Make it longer and make a story!

[DrudgeSkeleton]

Hmm

The animation was pretty simple, but this movie has a great atmosphere because of the well chosen music. It's cool.

[KWAS71KCK]

not bad

it was alright, pretty random and short, but it was cool to watch and the statement at the end is very true. watching everything from the cow to the fish in the river to the tree just die randomly was cool... though i didn't really understand why everything was just dying. maybe some sort of a storyline or plot wouldn't been good for this one.

[loserdowntehlane]

Ok

I can see that you are just now learning to use flash, and that is good, we need more people doing good work, though yours was not of top quality it will get better, i hope, i give you a 3/5.