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Reviews for "Herbert and the Mountain"

nice :)

I think the last scene was great, it seemed to me to be the point of the whole flash. Although, the beginning scene seemed out of place. The second scene (the social monster) had a point, a sort of plot and a conclusion, so did the final scene commentary, but the first scene didn't match with either of the other two. Still nice though :)

Thanks for the flash :)

was ok

The last part made me laugh so much ;).

The Easter egg mad me laugh out loud

Great work, but i must say the random joke made me laugh more. Keep up the good work.

Dont double submit in one flash

The second flash would have gotten a 10 but that first one was crap. Please dont do that again.

Continuity

It's obvious you have some good flash skills, but I wanted to point out a few personal preference issues.

On the first short, there isn't much of a joke to justify the long monologue at the end. The beatnic turkey was funnier, so you should have ended with him.

On the second short, you had a much better sense of content. But there are some continuity issues when the blue guy falls into the crevice. After he falls we see lava falling down both sides and then he climbs up one side to get out. After he climbs out he ends up at the top of a crevice with lava just beginning to flow in.
Otherwise it was good.