Its alright
If you have infact gotten better at flash since the production of this animation then redo it with a less ATHF feel make it a more original idea and it could become very popular. But the style was good none the less.
Reviews for "Raptor Lincoln - Intro"
okay straigt 8s
okay
Wow, this is funny and smoothly animated.
Wow, really good on the smooth animation and interesting humor. but u are right, i thought of ATHF part. looks as if it was meant to be a spoof or somthing. should use ur skills and make a diffrent series of somthing. but the movie was great! really funny and weird hah.
Man..
This is on par with some of the Dr. Weird openings. Good job.
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~~REVIEW~~
Now that was funny, but i must say props to you on the awsome artwork and design of the characters really showd the effort and time, allthough the animation was abit short it was great stuff, i was pleased to see it, you may want to add some voices for an overall better effect, anyways nice animation, keep it up...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the animation abit longer aswell as adding some subtitles, Voices were not bad Why not add some "SUBTITLES" just because it will improve on the flash and like in "DVD" movies you see them, and would just make it better because of people sometimes not always hearing everything clearly...
~~OVERALL~~
Great animation awsome characters and decent voices...
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