i'd like it but..
it seems like a video clip, not a preview for a futur story. anyway.. you get a protec pt from me.. but have in mind that when you choose a background sound, it better to not choose a popular song.. I don't listen to this kind of music you displayed.. but 'I'm fair.. but most poeple won't be, just because they don't like this song....
The music was cool...
But the rest was a bit strange, I missed a good story line in this flash. Not a bad job on your first one though. I must say I really liked the music, great job and good luck!
Needs improvement.
This is well done (unlike a few others I've seen). However,all you need to improve is your drawing. Good drawing=Good flash
~m_k~
I like.
Its very nice, good job on your first. Needs more story though.
Very nice indeed but...
I think it's missing a little something towards a story. You see some a Hero, doctor, and beings of mass horror yet there is nothing that tells about who they are and where they come from, let alone what parts they play in this. A few paragraphs in the begining might help to clear it, nothing but a few seconds worth to help us understand a bt more :) still nice Job