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Looks like the movie could be interesting but this trailer was lacking a bit. THere were some more upbeat parts that needed a more upbeat music instead of that loop you had. The graphics look like they are at a good starting point but could still be improved, you seem to have a good concept but don't over dramatise things in the movie by making things as slow. Also work on your spelling, you spelt a few of the words wrong :) I hope to see the full part soon.