What you have so far is good...
...finish it! or if you want feedback on what you've done so far, just clip the part that isnt finished when you upload it.
In any event, you did a good job with the illustration and animation. Just keep doing what you're doing and it'll be a good music video.
thank you
review
Well at least it's not crap.
If you want to show someone, why don't you just host it on a non-judgemental site?
because he believes that anything that makes it on newgrounds deserves an A+
Fix it up
It was not bad u did pretty good the music wasnt that bad neither wer the graphics but it freezes at the begining fix that up and re-post it ull be right and dont try to get ppl not to blam it by lieing
lol it wasnt a lie. lol it as all truth. but now that my art teacher saw it, you guys can blam the hell outta. it. a finished one is promised for the near future
Err...
It was going well...but suddenly the animation froze just after that other guy walked onto the screen, what's up with that?
1/5
yeah. read the description
okay
it was an alright for a 'test', but i would've suggested submitting this when your teacher would be watching this in like your class or close to it. most people do blam tests.... not that i'm saying that it should've been blammed, but i think you should've submitted it a little later.
yeah, i know. but i had to make this deadline and my art teacher says anything that makes it on newgrounds deserves an A. I got the A, so this can ba blammed to the ground now