Pretty good, few changes maybe?
I loved the bit at 00:27, where the kick came in and it was powerful and dark. I think the bit at 01:04 where it speeded up only to get back into the melody, didnt really work.
Also the bit at 01:37 where it got slower and calm, also didnt fit so well. In my opinion, i think it should possibly be taken out?
And then the bit aroun 02:20 where little hints of the kick were there, that was good.
The bit at 03:43 where you really start to notice the acid melody, was pretty good.
All in all, great song.
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