need more sounds
Half of the movie is soudless, it s a shame cause it would make it all better, u loack sound effect when they re in the car, when the drones go off etc. etc. etc.
also I think you could seriously use some music, and there was one of the subtitle that was a bif off at a point, but that wasnt too bad.
The rest os good, nice work, keep going
LOL
LOL that was funny, make more, can't wait to se ep. 2
For crying out loud...
What's with everyone's obsession over clocks? Why not something like... a light bulb... or a mirror or something like that. I mean come on, you know a mirror is cooler than a clock. Right... well... most of the clock flashes suck anyway. That said, this one wasn't all that bad, the graphics were good, especially for your first flash entry. Umm... it didn't interest me in the slightest though. It might have been more tolerable with a few more sounds. But uh... I dunno... keep it up I guess.
hmm
well this is pretty good as a first submission.
just needs a tweek on the special FX and some sound FX.
but other then that is was pretty good.
usually i would give a 3 for this, but since its you. i'll do a 5 for you.
Goodluck on CC forums.
Fairly good but needs sound
Like few people (I think) already mentioned needs sound effects, and sync the sound with the captions, but, i liked it, you have potential, I want to see moreeeee...hurry up...before I get bored...pleaseee