Not Bad
Your animation was nice but you need to work on something with a storyline. Good entry just pointless.
Reviews for "Battle Pickup!"
liam2317 responds:
Gotta love pointlessness, well at least I do.
thanks!
The graphics are nice, but not that much plot.
The graphics are very nice, and there's a lot of detail into the people and the pickup. The backgrounds kind of dull though, and the sound just really isn't that good. I like the preloader though. :) Overall, I give it a 7.
liam2317 responds:
Sounds are difficult, to be honest I hated the sound of the engine from the truck but it was the best i could find, and maybe i did uses some sounds over and over and over and over again but at least it has sound unlike a good number of submissions.
thanks!
for the most part its good....
however it seems rather pointless and what storyline is availible is limited greatly...this might have just been a test animation or something of that nature...
you could expand and use your skills on a full length 5 minute movie in the future and I am sure it would be great....
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liam2317 responds:
I wouldn't call it a test I would call it a "I'm still a not so fantabulistic animator and this is the best i can do" but thanks for the 6/10!
awesome graphics
looked great but the story pretty much blew...if you were to have some sort of story with those graphics im pretty sure you would see front page
liam2317 responds:
Well I would say thats reason enough to encorperate a story line into my next flash!
thanks!
for a short animation...
that was very well done. the drawingd and action were animated well and it had good, appropriate sounds. i liked it and wish you could concentrate on animations because that was excellent for what it was. nice job!
liam2317 responds:
All compliments! cool, thanks!!!... and yes I guess i could try concentrating a little harder.