No...
don't allow this through the portal...
Reviews for "RED SYMBOL"
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The text was too small to read and went by too fast. making it impossible to know what was going on. Text bubbles would work better. Slow it down a bit so we can read it too. Also you might consider a color background so the viewer can get a better idea of where this is all happening. It doesn't have to be detailed, just something other than the white screen.
Don't think you need to make any more of this...
The graphics weren't awful, but did the little guy really have to run for like 5 hours? And I don't know if this was just my sucky comp but the music kept like stopping for no apparent reason. Honestly I think you should come up with a different story line. People like funny more than action, in most cases. Not that there was much action in this.
Rushed job :/
Couple of pointers:
1) If you can't spell something then run it through a spell checker instead of guessing :P
2) Needs a hell of a lot more tweaking & polishing up. Some of the subtitles flash past so fast you can't even see them let alone read.
PS: No one likes millions of exclamations marks.
Newgrounds is not a place for rushed work
take more time. Do better job. it's not exactly the hardest formula in the world to figure out.
Ancientkey responds:
yeah i know and in the next one the text will be much bigger.