it was good
and i know it was supposed to be a short, but it was still just too.... short. this could be great if you made it longer
Reviews for "Ricks Shorts 1"
rz-stick responds:
ok, will make the next 'short' twice as long ty for the advice
It looks like..
You have some talent. If you practice I think you could be really good.
A little longer, and a little more developed, and youre gonna be awesome.
Good job
rz-stick responds:
thanks!! i really appretiate that, u have made my day (i have been very ill today) i will keep going no matter what anybody says, and i have been for a year!!!
((( OK )))
Well it was short, but interesting, i saw what seemed to be like a stick character a red guy which was ok, but wouldnt designing a unique characrater of your own be much more better? anyways funny short, it had abut of style with the animating sso nice work, hope to see more in the near future...
~X~
rz-stick responds:
ty and u will! iv'e started work on a new a full length animation :P
That was a good try
You can tell that you have a good idea how to animate but you need to further improve the story. Even tho it was supposed to be short, there was no plot to it and ended to fast. If you improve this one or make another one try to make it longer and more interesting. But still a great try
rz-stick responds:
thanks, iv'e just learnt how to effectively make stick figures walk, before i could barely make them move. the next short will be better promise!
Not bad, not bad
The movements of your sticks are a little choppy, so you might consider smoothing those out. Stick animation should be really good since the characters aren't complex to draw. I think you have some good ideas, but it's hard to follow the text, and the sticks have to stop to talk, so try to make it more action and less explanation. I think that this could have been really good if you had a whole group of sticks fighting to get across and avoid the thing at the same time. Just work on it some. I'm looking foward to seeing what you can do with your skills movies that aren't tests. You should check out my stick test movie lol. It got a friggin 3.2! Good work, stick with it.
rz-stick responds:
ty, i am making a new stick animation, with a very original concept!!! nobody would guess what it is but it gives stick fighting a new edge xD, hope you get to see it and ive been working on it for about 5 hours iand i am very pleased with how smooth it is i saw one of your animations and it was odd but cool