Great job! What you did right:
1) You made me care about the characters.
2) The dialogue is perfect... it could be a stick cartoon, but with this script it would still be great.
3) The ending makes me want to watch chapter three.
You are on the right track. Great job.
Cool
Better than the last one. "Fuck the police!" that's a song title by the way.
nwa... classic shit, one of my all time favs!!
Bumpy's DEad
Five-00000000000
that's hilarious, keep em' coming!!!!
very cool series
I like that it's a story based series with comedic elements thrown in rather than the typical comedy based series with story elements thrown in (don't get me wrong, I love both the Decline and the Nobodies series) Like it lots and looking forward to part 3 :)
Noice!
I'm digging this series, you're doing a pretty good job! Of course, some things could be improved, but it's a lot better than most stuff that floats through NG! Props!
Needs more of that Hiero sound! :D