At least it looks like you tried.
Not especially good, but it looks like you put some time and effort into it at least. The major complaint would be that there was too little going on for too long. It does look like you're definitely capable of improvement though, you just need to hone your writing and editing skills. Good luck.
Two months I have been trying. Time and effort, I redid the whole first scene about three times. Writing skills need to be improved, how does one go about the "definitely capable of improvement though" though? No one knows....
Good job
That was pretty good... good drawings... but there was a lack of animation.... try to make him move his arms and stuff.... also your preloader needs fixin... It needs a "stop" command.... but otherwise good job... kinda wierd how mario would just say things outta nowhere... I looked kinda cheesy, because there was no mouth/mustache movement.... I like it tho.... 4/5 because I liked when the kids went "yay"
You look kinda cheesy? I'm sorry to hear that, hm, someone told me to get rid of that cheer, er.. I guess I'll wait for the next person to tell me what I should do with my flash, also It would be very hard for me to do moustache movement but I thought I didn't need any, I thought the flash and all the extras were outstanding, obviously there are Ameri-...people out there who don't share my taste in whatever.
Thanks for the truthful review.
Pretty good
The animation was good as it looked like the actual Paper Mario but the story basically seemed like it was Paper Mario and Super Mario combined. Still awesome. BTW Paper Mario pwns.
Best review yet, thanks very much.
Too long
Don't like the mix of the graphics.
Which graphics? The sprites? My drawings?
Wow, or something
Sorry MEK, I was dying to see the end result, but it will not load properly for me. First I tried four times to get it to load and it goes straight to the Super Paper Mario (bros) screen zipping past the menu, then stays there.
Then I tried clicking on the menu button in the 2 seconds before it dissappears. This puts me onto a screen where the loading alternates with the Play button, but it does not load. I waited five minutes but saw no change. I tried this twice. I have finally voted on it as I would have, based on the last time I saw it.
I would expect a lot of a program this length, and I got it. There is so much to see it is like an evening's TV and so much to do it is almost a game!
As it was on our screens, the sound quality does not match your great vision, your imagination or the obvious effort you have put into this Flash. As I told you, personally I would have made more of the Paper feature myself.
The Flash is very good. Best of luck