Nicely Done
I like this flash alot. I can't wait for the fifth episode. I think your doing a good job. Hmm maybe you could mix some of the re charcthers in, like hunk, claire, carlos etc. And mb some lickers or tyrants.. but it is a sprite film. But i like it either way. Keep up the goodwork.
No sprites for tyrant or lickers.
Uh...
..Interesting. I know I use this word a lot, but it's true a lot of times. Anyway. The OVERALL plot is good, and the way you manipulated the sprites was interesting. I don't understand why Marco and Fio kept killing the soldiers, as they seemed on the same side, but they DID do a food job. The only problem as I see it, is that Marco got turned into a zombie. Call me a romantic, but I always like stories where the main characters live...get married, live happly ever-after, whatever...so Marco=zombie is a big aww in my point of view. :D. U do a good job man, and I would like to see another one by you.
They did a food job? No one was fed during the making of this flash. But thanks for your kindness.
Almost Perfect...
Nice job. You have the ability to put the right songs to the right parts, which a lot of people can't do(sadly). There were really only 3 problems that I had with the flash.
Marco's voice actor; but everyone has to start somewhere so I didn't let it drop the score.
The screen didn't stay complete and some areas had holes. Occasionally you would see through some sprites and there would be white lines on the side of the screen from empty areas.
Some parts of the flash were too quiet. The absence of sound and/or music can make some flashes boring. However, this didn't happen often so it wasn't a big problem.
Aside from those small problems, keep up the good work! It's an interesting series and I'd love to see the rest. 5
Well thanks!
KEWL
yay man! imagine all the ppl.... heh john lennon music.Back to the movie it's really good and there is voice!!! really awesome man keep up the good work!!!
Lol I really dunno why I put John Lennon in there. Thx for zeh kindness.
Much better!
^^Good Points^^
It is now obvious that your graphical skill is not at all well displayed in the previous episodes of this series. The animations in this one were much smoother and there were a lot more of them, which made the movie a lot less boring. The voice overs were a nice touch, and the improvements you made were very worthwhile.
^^Needs Improving^^
The only thing I didn't like was that you didn't have a more complex menu where one could pick the episode they wanted to watch. That would have been a lot more useful than having to watch every episode over again.
yeah I was planning to do that but completely rushed the end.