Well done not so funny
When you do slow comedy, the jokes are slow people talk slow, it stops being funny after a while and begions to be annoying. We want the jokes to come at us fast and in a large amount. The most funny thin gin this flash for me is when he says" Protecting these turtle eggs and making a diference in the world" thats it the rst is somewhat funny but not LOL funny. The Begining gay joke is half way funny. You went too far at the end with it, especially the almost starting to kiss, too far. Why? Its not funny. And also go watch some family guy episodes, thats the kind of comedy that you should have tired to make here.