Reviews for The Enemy Above

[ChaoticTheorem]

Ummm

Can you say Star Wars rip off? He's being chased down by Roy when all out of the blue Wario and DK gun Roy down? Let's see, that's like when Han and Chewie took down Vader chasing Luke.
And is it just me... or is it slightly conceited to make yourself the hero of your stories? I just watched all 5 of these, and it's no small wonder only this and your first one got awards. It's just, icky is the best word. Who's that general guy, why the heck are the Mario Bros not in the Mario world, what's with all the Star Wars stuff, why are you the hero!?
It's good, I'm not saying it's horrible. But, work with some more originality, you had all you needed with the Mushroom Kingdom having a military, but then you threw in all this other weird stuff, including yourself.
Finish up this series, then make another w/o yourself.

von-Brunk responds:

1- The end was quite possibly the biggest and most obvious fan-boy reference to Star Wars one could think of. Still think it's a rip-off? Yes? Then by your logic, Family Guy... Nevermind...

2- Notice how it says "episode 5" of the series in the description. Something ought to key you in that in previous episodes, the "general" and the Baron were introduced.

And how is it not original, when I have new characters? Look, if I use Mario and Luigi, you'll go apeshit and say I'm non-creative, whilst if I use myself and new characters, you whine and say, "Who the hell are those guys?"

[minotaur6]

eh

i cant stand this kind of stuff, but i guess its a good job for its genre.

[reboot1]

Great

That was a nice bit of work there. Keep up the great work.

[ramfir]

thumbs up!

Nice piece of work. Great idea. I like It.

[Khaiden]

oh, so it was a Star Wars rip-off...

But it was good, the ending says that you'll have a 2nd part.
I'll look forward for your future submissions.