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Reviews for "To the portal: day 1"

Not bad

I mean it was kinda lame, but at least the AS was good. The animation was clean, but kind of plain.

I protected your post, but I would expect Day 2 to have a bit more beef in it. I think the whole idea of a flash file traveling to the portal through random areas makes me laugh though.

The game, also, is very easy. I'm just trying to throw out ideas to help you out.

Good luck on Day 2!

mooseisloose responds:

Thanks for the ideas and thanks for the good luck :)

ummm interesting

u have a nice concept here, put a poorly made game. first of all make some kidn of enemies instead of just platforms. make the jumping higher and more smooth so u don't hit the edge of the platform and bounce up again. Also don't make the guy just a flash file. give him legs and arms and eyes or wutever. I would have like a sort of life meter ranked out of 5. and it must be kept above 1 or 1.5 or sumthing or else u get blammed (die). keep working on this

mooseisloose responds:

Good ideas, but I'm quite poor at actionscript. I will try to do as many of these as i can.

Lol

This is kind of fun. Nice idea, but bad graphics. Try and make the .swf file a vector image, and better preloader/menu.

Also have a reward, like..

'You are now reviewing your .swf file as you have made it through the portal'

And have an awesome Flash that someone can make :)

mooseisloose responds:

I cant do that kinda of rewrd until the fifth game. im working on the second one now, its far better

Okay,

It was enjoyable, but kind of simple. Next time, make something that packs a challenge

mooseisloose responds:

I will. i made this in about 2 hrs, but I'm getting to grips with this kind of thing now :D

Meh

Kept me busy for a little while, but it's too boring and too short. Make something fun happen.

2/5

mooseisloose responds:

stay tuned for part 2! only on newgrounds.com :p