nice
this is nice you could make this a game ^^ keep up the good work.
Reviews for "Xiao Online - Episode 1 +"
Tiger0801 Do you even know what Xiao Xiao means?
i bet not Xiao Xiao is Small Small In chinese Dumbo
Hmm...
The dialogue didn't really give the characters any personality, and there were some capitalization errors (if you intend to make this a series, it helps to make the dialogue look and/or sound nice). It wasn't too bad, but it needs more depth and plot if you want it to be popular. Just watching kids play an online game isn't that exciting.
Not bad
Everyone discrediting this because it is similar to maple story, shut the fuck up please. Seriously, grow up you guys, some people here haven't even HEARD of maple story, I use a mac so I have never played it before, I hope you retards don't pull that shit on me. Mac users are deprived of the mainstream games. Off topic, back to the subject. The animation was par, the style was lacking, but this one professes good skill with flash. I say you just work on your illustrations and you'll be fine. Test out some other ways of animating too, sometimes certain styles work better in certain scenes. Don't rush the improvement process though, you're doing fine. Don't listen to negative comments, just listen to critique.
You know...
... It Looks alot Like Maplestory... Or is it me thats follin myself?