Okay Start
Hey, I love that song!! If you're still going to finish it, maybe we can do a collab to finish it! Email me at: nose@mannyflash.net if you are insterested in working with me
Reviews for "Taxman (not finished)"
ThemonkeyonNG responds:
yeah sure, i'd be interested.... ill e-mail you some time
hmm...
Well, it's not bad, but you aren't supposed to post unfinished work, so it's most likely going to get blammed...
ThemonkeyonNG responds:
Thanks...
:'( eh....
Hopefully not....
taxes suck
taxes suck!
ThemonkeyonNG responds:
AHAH yeah they do.
-Themonkeyonng
Hmm
I'm not a huge fan of music videos so I may be a bit biased.
But anywhoooo, it wasn't bad. I'm no flash artist but syncing lyrics to mouth animation must have been a pain, but you did a pretty good job on it so I give you a lot of credit for that.
Graphics weren't too hot but that's nothing you can't improve on, backgrounds looked nice though.
Even though as I said I don't care for music videos I realize that they are probably a real pain to make, probably even more so than traditional films.
Nice job, hope to see more from you :)
ThemonkeyonNG responds:
Well, thanks alot for you honesty, and for your review!
In the final flash of this, I WILL have better drawings and what not. When I first started this, I was just learning flash, and worked on and off on this. I am getting better, and hopefully my final flash will be good enough for front page?! lol
YES it was a pain in the ass to sync the mouth...its still not the best, and could be improved.
Well thanks alot for your review
-Themonkeyonng
Needs a bit more work
Cutsey fun! I like the sequences and transitions but please, work on your drawing of faces, though the car graphic was pretty sweet. Overall, a good start. Keep it up!
ThemonkeyonNG responds:
Yeah...I shall try to draw faces better....thanks for the tip...
Yeah it took me a while to do the car, I didn't know there was a trace thing in flash, so i traced and colored the whole thing by hand...lol
Thanks alot
-Themonkeyonng