Not Bad.
Hey, you're not bad with flash. But there's some things I would like to say about it.
First of all, your story line is good, but you should try to make things slightly more clear.
Second, you use a little too much motion tweening and not enough frame-by-frame... You tend to make the characters too detailed by adding shading, making the animation much harder to deal with. I found your fight scenes a little strange because it seems like you rushed it. It seems that way with your whole movie. What's better? A flash movie done quickly that's pretty good, or a flash movie that took in a long time, that's excellent?
But there were some good things about it.
You voice actresses/actors were terrific. They matched the characters exactly. Great job with that!
Also, the drawings are very good. I bet you're a very good artist. The shading, the positioning of the characters, and the character designs are impressive.
It's a pretty good flash movie. You did a good job. Keep it up.