Pretty Good
It is a good flash, but put effort on it and it will be great, practice, try it, and probably joining this flashes in one, it can be a success. All because it is kinda short. Anyhow, keep up the good work dude.
Pretty Good
It is a good flash, but put effort on it and it will be great, practice, try it, and probably joining this flashes in one, it can be a success. All because it is kinda short. Anyhow, keep up the good work dude.
good idea, just needs tuning up
you have a good idea, but you need to develop it a little more. you should try to give a little more effort into the animation although you are doing pretty good
not bad..
the story line is kinda quick, maybe some more text or a longer flash..?
because is hard to follow sometimes.
and the sound is bad if you ask me, the short samples are a little irritating..
but no offence i liked it ^^ i only show you your weak points (from my point of view)
Not bad, I suppose.
You're animation wasn't too bad. The sound was a little lackluster, but alright, I guess. The problem is that this just wasn't very funny. It just didn't strike me as being very original or exciting. It's not bad, but you need to try a little bit harder.
Lol
Lol, it was ok...
Whatever, it could be better, but I reckon that the next one will be good...