wasn't bad
Not bad sprites were pretty good but u could of made this a lot smother.
wasn't bad
Not bad sprites were pretty good but u could of made this a lot smother.
Pretty good, In fact, I can't wait for the next!
Its not the best, but if you keep working on it, it can be a really good series, just work on keeping the background still,(because in the one scene the background was moving around when it should have been still)and try to get voice acting in there if possible to make it sound better, besides that, it was fun to watch.
woot
It was newbish, the sounds were NOOBY. Too loud and annoying. Get the SFX done.
nice but needs fixing
first of all ur beginning had way too much dialogue and u need to cut it down. Fix ur dialogue bar too and make speech bubble instead or sumthing. You also have a lot of grammar mistakes and spelling issues. Then just fix ur graphics of the things that u hand draw and u'll be fine.
wow you suck at life and english
the grammar was so poor that it wasnt even a style. I saw the other two and they are just as bad. You must be new to flash because this poor quality and reflects nothing special. So anyway this was a poor excuse for a flash entry and i hoped to see it blamed. You get all my 0...