Reviews for When Writers Lose..Collab

[ilyacera]

Uhm...

Ohkay, time for some constructive critisizm... Now, I'd have voted higher, maybe, if there was more of a point to everything, where it'd be more entertaining... Or was this the point of you Flash? I don't know, but even a Flash such as this could have a little more...something. I don't know, so much for constructiveness, yah?

I watched it twice, to be sure, and I thought it was a little cutter, with it's Bomber Man and Mario scenes; they got a chuckle from me, be sure... The art, well, it was pretty decent, probably better than something -I'd- whip up, but a little more time on it wouldn't hurt...

Otherwise, keep it up. Time will tell, because if this one isn't saved, your next one might be, and so on and so forth. ^_^ Just remember, keep having fun with it!

~Lady Daeva~

Radioactive24 responds:

R- yes, will do. thank you for the "consrtuctive criticism". :)

[BlueZombieClock]

Hmm

Well, usually i wouldnt of voted high on this, but i know how hard collabs can be to organize (hell, trust me T_T) so for the big effort, i'll vote 5

[Takuto55]

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

That was good. I hope this one is saved cause that was funny. Congrats :)

Radioactive24 responds:

thank you. Finally, someone who is not a total hypocrite like the last guy. no offense to anyone else.

[adreniline7]

Meh, Smells.

First, I saw half of these submissions on putfile 5 minutes ago, and thought they were horrible including that stupid halo part that RADIOACTIVE made. Most of you guys need a lesson in spriting before you do this. Second, why dosent the cursor dissapear when the movie starts? Because this is really sad. I hope you dont make another collab without improving with this. This collab in all is mediocre.

Radioactive24 responds:

R- wow. you are pretty arrogant. and where did you see them on Putfile? have you been to NGCollabs? I feel bad being insulted so horribly by a fellow bot.<-in bot brigade!!! i so hoped it wasnt you too... oh well. and these are your opinions so, what ever.

[TheDevilMyself]

Couple of things...

First, i think the mouse icon should revert when you get to the movie part, because it's just distracting! Second, i think the whole bit needs to be more linear - maybe have a collective plot or something? And, as always, i think people need to learn how to do pixel art, but that's just my opinion.

The rest of it was really good - i liked the mario thing, but the Goomba seemed to be missing a few pixels when it walked, and that part could have REALLY used extra pixel art for the gun and the crater.... that would look really impressive. The sound was kind of lacking, but maybe that's just because i'm really tired and not in the mood for it?

Any way you look at it, it was a pretty decent submission and i'm betting it'll go through, and i'd like to see future collabs from you guys!

D

Radioactive24 responds:

R- Thanks for the tips! we will keep them in mind for our next collabs.