You need to work on spelling
The tutorial was full of distracting spelling errors. The directions were ambiguous in parts.
Reviews for "How to draw Salad Fingers"
Aprime responds:
Thanks for the advice you could have gave it higher thoe, what words were spelt wong? and thanks for saying what i cold improve ULIKE MY OTHER REVIEWS, lol any way thanks
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^^Good Points^^
Not sure whether or not this tutorial would actually be considered helpful. I guess breaking down the characters would be good enough for most people. You seem to draw them pretty well, so I guess you know what you are talking about.
^^Needs Improving^^
A lot of the times it's just like "Draw it like this" with not many tips in here at all. It seemed a bit vague to me.
Aprime responds:
lol, thanks for the review
I need ur help with that, its hard to explain what ur drawing
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Good
I think the flash is well done, but I am sorry to say that it does not teaches to draw the characters. Maybe it helps a little. But too little. I suggest you to use your knowledgment and talent to do something different. Cheers!
Aprime responds:
Give me an example please :) BUT VOTE HIGHER! :)
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.....<sound of air being sucked through teeth>...
<Takes Deep Breath>
1. Full stops are not hard to use and are lacking considerably.
2. The shape is an oval, not overal.
3. Capital letters at the end of sentences.
4. The word is pick, not pic.
5. For the love of god...its WRINKLES, not winkles!
6. The word is remember, not remeber.
7. When talking in the possessive, the word is his, not hes.
8. The word is you'll, not ull.
9. The word is hunch, not huntch.
10. The verb is know, not no.
11. The word is because, not becuase.
12. The word is puppets, not pupets
.....em, I could go on. Seriously though, if you want to make your flash animations look any way professional, use half-decent grammer.
Other then that, the flash was actually pretty good. If I was you, I'd release it again however this time using a dictionary.
One final tip, learn to take criticism. Its not particularly good natured if you give abuse to every reviewer who doesn't like your work.
p.s. Apologies if you're illiterate/dyslexic ect. No harm intended.
Aprime responds:
I understand, but some of thoes thing you said is just for short, like no insted of Know, and 2 insted of two, I also understand the other things you said like because, thats just a type error, but you can still read it, even if it is spelt wrongly, but the question is did you learn any thing, if yes then vote on that, if no then your welcome to vote as you have done, however im sure you did learn something
Well well
Appearantly the autor of this movie is a little gay fairy boy from his replies to reviews :o
You submitted a movie, so you wanted it criticized, wanted to only get good reviews? Only cheers, and worships, and whatnot...?
Go suck off a donkey fag.
Aprime responds:
hay the review are for saying how i can improve it, not saying its crap, ur supposed to say why is it crap, i bet you dont even no the meaning of the word review and ur how old? 16!, how sad can u get, and at least when the other people complain, they say how you can improve it, Go look up, in the dictionary, what review means, u prik!
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