Sorry Dude.
I didn't like it at all. The graphics were immature as well as the lines which were also cheesy and teenager-like. The manga effects were high-schoolish which kind of destroyed the almost dawny mood but thanks to making it in black and white it helped conjure the idea that someone important was being missed. The music was good and it worked well on the concept. I understand you draw like this because i suppose you must be a real DJ or something. Sorry for being critical, mate. ;-)
Hey no problem. I've improved since then and I totally agree with you on very valid points.
This WAS my first flash movie and I wasn't really out to entertain anyone else but my fiancé. If you ever see my new works, I'm sure you'll be at least a little more impressed.
Thanks for the review and your critisisms. I appreciate you not being rude :P
Cheers buddy!
no
i dont care where you got the inspiration. it's no excuse to submit crap. besides, we don't want crap about your personal life in the portal, unless its funny. this type of stuff is for you're own little world, and the bbs.
Hey, thanks for your useful words. Just cuz it's sentimental, I put quite a bit of work into it so naturally I'm going to want people to see it. Anyway, majority of people seem to like it so... so... so THERE!!
Lol , fag
You are such a fagget. What a friggin gay flash , you cryed makin it? I laughed all the way fag.
Next time , dont post on newgrounds.
Yes I cried my emo eyes out! I miss her so much I might just kill myself. I feel sorry for cold bastards like you. At least the rest of the people here seem to have hearts. Please go forth and multiply! Thank you.
queer
GET OVER YOOURSLEF YOU FAG I FYOU DONT GO SHOVE YOOUR THUMB UP YOUR ASS AND CUT YOOUR SELF AND CRY IN A CORNER I DONT WANT TO SE THE BULLSHIT DRAMA .............GET THE FUCK OVERYOOURSELF
Lol! I actually laughed when I read your comment. I was looking forward to an unconstructive critisism cuz it always entertains me.
If you didn't want to see the "bullshit drama", maybe you should have just clicked the 'back' button at the top of your explorer window (the little arrow that points left. You see it, little boy?) and watch a stick movie instead.
I'm not depressed. I'm not unstable. I've just got a fucking heart and a lot of love for my lady! You should try it sometime. Oh no, sorry you've only started crushing on girls since you're only 10, aren't you? Oh well. Santa won't be giving you any pressies this year! BAD BOY!