Good stuff
Well, it WAS emo, like I suspected. And yet, I still liked it. Why? Because it's heart was in the right place. My girlfriend lives a ways away, so I can relate to not having someone you love by your side.
Technically, a few pointers. Yes, it does ramble a bit towards the end. Perhaps a bit of animation there wouldn`t go amiss, just to keep the viewer`s attention.
Apart from that, a damn good effort. Here`s hoping you don`t run your phone bill up too much in the meantime, talking to your woman.
Till the next time, True Believer.
Excelsior!