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Reviews for "Motion IPOD"

Strange. . .

Man, that was definitely strange, yet something different. I do like to see different styles and ideas in flashes. This happened to be one of them. Even though the sound effects for the shots being fired did get a little annoying after a while, there's not much to do about that. I liked the style, for sure. It has it's own uniqueness to it. I really didn't understand the flash all the way through, but it was quite enticing, nonetheless. Not bad at all.

Metal-Chuy responds:

Hey, thanks for the comments. I tried to fix the volume of the sounds but I directly put them into the timeline, so I can't really modify them using AC

i liked it!

an original style, i liked it a lot. definitely something new and interesting. good job!

Metal-Chuy responds:

heh heh heh. The movie is turning out better than I thought....

It's Cool

It's okay, if you want to make it better, here are some tips: :)

1. Try and sort out the audio for the film (its a bit all over the place really,)
2. When the person's text bubble comes up, if you can you could add speech to the movie of the guy/girl whos talking.
3. When everything goes boom all over the place you can work on it a little bit more so it would make the graphic bar come up.
4. Get a Newgrounds PreLoader for whatever version of flash that you have.
5. Put some more coulor into the movie. (Unless the kinda red and gray is what the effect is.)

This is a balance movie and it cool.

Oliver

Metal-Chuy responds:

1) Working on it. Next time I will use AC sounds instead of timeline
2) I did, whenever a person comes up, he/she is supposed to moan (In a good way) but it just didn’t work.
3) What do you mean graphic bar?
4) Totally forgot about preloader....
5) The style was intended to be that way. Only four colors were used.

Thanks for your suggestions.

eh

not exactly awe inspiring, but kind of retro. better asplosions and sound sync would have been cool though.

Metal-Chuy responds:

agree.

((( NEEDS WORK )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was decent, but could be better, it sorta hurt my eyes at first with the close up and far away images but sorta neat i supose, the color tone was different aswell, nice flash, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well you could add a few different colors for change, the "RED" text was hard to read maybe black would be better, and make some animated characters instead of short clips of people and stuff...

~~OVERALL~~
A different sorta flash, abit bland and could use more effort, it was interesting though, keep it up...

~X~