A man who died of misory...
A sad story indeed I've seen the like. It was... so and so the cartoon.
Reviews for "Sida : The Invisible Evil"
poor old man..
did he actully died there alone in the end? well..it that the case i just feel sorry for that old man who died^^...well shure it was a nice touching storyie?^^....
And good work ^^
Needs a Better Plot
Your arabic calligraphy and design was beautiful. It is rare to see a flash such as yours that isn't about killing Arabs or anything. . .yet your story could have been better if you had shown WHY Sida went mad. . . .maybe a little of his story would be good. It would explain why he killed himself in the end. Other than that great work. Keep it up!
No connection
First off, why was Sida crazy? He was merely a nice man who was simply homeless! That's got nothing to do with insanity. Second, how did he die? I think you must have left some things out... so put back in what you took out and maybe you'll get better ratings.
Hey
It's pretty good, but I don't get what do you mean by the invisable evil?