Great!
I really liked the story, and indeed, the fact that it is set in a whole different culture and is, for once, not spoken in english, makes it even better. At some points I agree the subtitles should be slower, and I'd have liked it if the music was more outspoken arabic-style (but that's my personal taste), and sometimes I thought the people moved rather unnatural. But other than that: you really have got talent and I hope you've got some more of these stories up your sleeve!!!!