ok...
good not great not bad but good. and next time detail the flash as good as you can detail the master sword.
Reviews for "Zelda nintedo 1st draft 2"
another zelda flash?
don't get me wrong but i like seeing these spoofs/parody flashes, but it always is the same thing. The characters were very inconsistant in the way you draw them and there is WAY too much motion tweening. In the preloading screen you can see that link's arm goes INTO his wrist. also this movie is kinda slow, try eithe uping the frame rate or making bigger gaps between the keyframes. Motion tweening also tend to make things move slower so kindly stop using them. observe already made flashes on this site and see that barely anyone uses motion tweens, if they do then they either are a beginner (no offense) or they have some constant slow moving object somewhere. And when you free transform symbols it tends to make them look wierd when you put them out of proportion. The voices are another issue, ganon's was ok but too low, deep, and not understandable. Link's was just outta wack. Ganon's laugh was a big mistake also, macth the voices together, and try not to use already made voice for the characters if they don't match the voice you have, there are ppl here who would love to do voice acting for characters. i think i've gotten to say everything i wanted to soo... good luck on making ur nxt flash!
5..........simple words
blam!!! this!!!! piece!!!! of!! crap!!! this is horible because of the following reasons:1:quality is horrible. 2:the voices sucked. 3:theres basicly no plot at all. 4:the most important complaint when gandolf knoks link into the air and u see up his skirt where the hell are his nuts or more imortantly does he have any (no pain intended to the zelda fans) with improvement this could be an okay flash try agin
So this is a review of both right...
Okay alright, well since I rated every catogorie so different, I'll explain them all to you :)
Graphics; 7
Well, its nice, but its shivering and shivering-shivering, thats a real pitty, maybe you should stick to 1 animation tipe next time.
Style; 10
Well, thats it, i voted 4, because of this, you've got all the angles and effects in your head, next time, get them on animation
Sound: 0
Bad, bad bad choice of music and sounds... Really, anoying tunes and blings and bangs.
Violence; 6
Well there is violence in it, but its not really diehard, but this isnt really that necesairy, so I dont care...
Interactivity; 0
Well.. there is no interactivity ;) Thats only with games, or maybe with flashes that have got animated backgrounds and stuff.. But you dont use it, I dont care :)
Humor; 6
Well 6, nice humour, but get is on the screen next time :D
Overall; 7
Just what i think is the best
I can see alot of hard work
You put a lot of effort into it. But you still need to practice. It came off clunky and I couldnt understand what the troll guy was saying. Put subtitles in it at least.
keep practicing, you will have some nice pieces after a while.
Its better to err on the side of the action going too quick than too slow. One easy fix would be to take out some of the tweening panels you have in there and speed up the action.
It was an ambitious effort. Right now you have to practice more to get your skills to the level to pull it off.
Also I think you had more details in there than needed. Watch some disney and some 4+ episodes to see how they did it. Get ideas.
Dont give up.