Sorry but this was only Mediocre.
This is pretty bad. Yay, you did ok, but you need to expand on your skills. try using the paintbrush tool or sumthing, instead of some shape tool, it looks better that way. Take a lesson in animation and come back later. To the Little fat boy in the cartoon-
If you feelin' overweight girl,
Drop a couple pounds, Drop a couple pounds, Drop a couple pounds.
If yo stomach bigger than your ass, bitch,
Drop a couple pounds, Drop a couple pounds, Drop a couple pounds.
If you ate to many snacks, girl,
Drop a couple pounds, Drop a couple pounds, Drop a couple pounds.
Now if you can't see your shoes and you don't know what to do,
betta hit the gym girl, stop eatin' all the food.
Yay, loose some fuckin weight!