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dude if it is an intro try to make it short, like him at the front of the screen.. doing that little laugh, then he goes and spray paints Lineboy in a cloud of spray paint.
Just some tips
Reviews for "Lineboy Is Back 1.5"
whoa
i look at ur profiel and saw the pic of u,then compared it to the drawing,and i could NOT tell the difference,awesome graphics,add sound!
nice piece of art
nice piece of flash you made, cool concept, i think you should add sound and colour but nice work man.
((( CUTE )))
~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cute, the character and his simple animation made me laugh, the drawings on the board could be better, maybe add a touch of color just to improve on the flash, nice job overall though...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More color and smoother animating would be nice...
~~OVERALL~~
Cute character but lacks attention on other areas such as smoother animation...
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