Not bad
Yeah, good work. I like the frog best too! Maybe a spinoff flash?
Reviews for "Death of Masaki"
Holo-Alf responds:
Thanks, but your my BROTHER.
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~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was funny, made me laugh, the "CHARACTERS" are cute but lacked in animation like limbs and facial animation, work on that and it will eb great, nice work so far...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better animation of the characters, keep it up...
~~OVERALL~~
Funny and cute characters but they need more animatin to them...
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6.5
A short film in the vain of a classic samurai flim wiht a woman named Masaki hell bent on destroying everyone in her path. What is her reasoning for the murder? Will someone be able to beat her at her on game? It is a fun concept, and while it has been done adnausem, there is still room for originality. The artwork could really use some improvements, especially in the close up shots as some of the characters were a bit underdeveloped. That being said, the shots from rather far away were fine and their definately were an ample amount of them. I liked your use of sound effects, they were quite fitting. Keep up the good work, you can only continue to imrove.
Ryan
Holo-Alf responds:
Thanks for the constructive critisism, I never really considered pursuing flash to any really high level, but I might just try and make something more ambitious as a result of your encouragment! Thanks!
Ok,
Good movie, but i have to ask.. why don't the charactors have any knees? :P
Other than that it was good, nice work.
Holo-Alf responds:
Yeah, haven't got round to knees yet! I'm still very much on the basics, will try to get to grips with knees soon! Maybe one day I'll try elbows too!
Sad ending, ive seen far more advanced work done thats why the rating is low! good work though!