about the storyline
hmm the flash itself is good, but... the storyline is, well terrible
keep up the good "flashing" but work a little on the storyline ;D
Reviews for "A Detective's Story"
whats up with that
very abrubt i know you warned us, but come on you had me hooked with graphics and the detective, not to mention you spelled it wrong, and then you stop it short i agree with a guy from a ways down, it could have been great and then it turned to crap.
Wasn't all that great
This was short, boaring, and quite random at the end. I really didn't care for it that much.
Ummm..
You spelled Detective wrong on the flyer, it's short, and has no point.
Boring!
THIS THING IS BORING-.-!