Reviews for Desert Garden

[XwaynecoltX]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
I actually liked the song, it did however seem slow, and the guy didnt move much you should have him walk down an aisle or something and show the crowd he is singing to, and subtitles wouldnt hurt...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More scenes in the flash, with more animation from the character, and All though the voices were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble...

~~OVERALL~~
Good video almost like your there in front of him kinda neat flash...

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[thejuiceizloose]

It was a good song

Did you write the song, because I am basing this score on the assumption that you wrote this song yourself. It was an excellent song, but the flash was lacking. You did a very good job with the lip synching however, and that is one of the more difficult things to pull off. Work at adding more to your entries. This was decent.

[johnnydfan]

A little boring

But yes, it is good for your second flash. Next time try to make it more interesting by puting in different backgrounds, adding a story...ya kno...anything besides just a guy standing there and singing.