Just two things
Great flash--slightly choppy animation--however the camera angles more than made up for it. Very nice work--I love to see flashes that obviously have a lot of effort put in behind it.
As for some tips:
You may want to look into fixing the load bar. For some reason it's stretching out of it's "load box," which may be a caused error had you attempted to alter NG's preloader improperly. The second thing you may want to look into is the volume--which I think was practically maxxed out. Louder music does not equal a better movie. You may want to set it back to default and let the audience decide when they want their ears to bleed. :3
*pokes
Great work!