needs to be longer
Judging from this short, I think that you may have some great potential.
1.) It need to be Longer
- give it an actual storyline and more characters
2.) Graphics are alittle too sketchy
- Clear up the pics and add another frame per
second for a smoother delivery
3.) If you get better into it... an interactive fight scene would kick
ass... with alternate endings depending on who wins the fights.
Keep up the good work
This was a short flash
If this was american idol I would be simon in this flash. If you have watched american idol you would know that simon is a negative british. Therefore i am saying this flash is average graphics but the humor sucks because there is only like 5 seconds, and tehy watse it all on saying hi guys another android so on and so on. My advice is to look off of other flashes and say "why should I make a flash out of my own imagination when I can steal ideas from somebody else?"
Still I liked the chocolate factory though.
you bring up very vaild points,, and Oohh look a butterfly!!
just2pale
Cool
Dude, seriously short, but seriously good!!!
=D
cute.. very cute, btw who did the voice for veggie? (thats 'me' for vegeta) cuz that sounded just like the proper one!
all me,, I had a bad cough,, and swore thought,, so it was easy to get the voice haha,, I did this while I had the flu,, mega man and goku's,, were hard to get them higher... lol
another funny short
not bad. nuff said.