incredible, but...
the story was great, however, in this episode it would have helped to show man interacting with the "devices" in some way. or at least showing some kind of visuals that were more closely related to the story. It seems obvious that, (even though you are a great artist) you arent great at actually animating, and although that did not hinder you in previous animations, it did this time around. the story however was incredible, bringing everything full circle and giving the title a newer meaning. Good Job!