Sorry
all I see was same scene played over and over!
Sorry, I m very impatient person when it come to lonnnnnng flash...
-Avek
Reviews for "The Fireman's Daughter"
xtil responds:
PATIENCE IS A VIRTUE NINJA TURTLES MOTHERFUCKERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
Um
Yeah dude, nothing happens. And from reading your reviews you dont sound serious about this. Good drawing but I dont think your being serious.
...
yeah what the other guy said it makes no sence and just loops you got skils though you just need to put em to better use
xtil responds:
IT JUST LOOPS? I GOT SKILLS? I NEED TO PUT THEM TO BETTER USE? YEAH WHAT THE OTHER GUY SAID? IT MAKES NO "SENCE"? ELLIPSIS?
You didn't finish it.
A lot of things seem to be in place here. However, your big problem is just that--you didn't finish it properly. Your version of suspense was kinda weak, and it...it just felt incomplete.
xtil responds:
this review gave me a boner everyone
What daughter?
If this is a preview about something involving a fireman's daughter, shouldn't she have at least a cameo in the preview? Perhaps a photograph of her? Also, your script needs a little work. Your opening line was a tad cliche.
xtil responds:
she gets raped ok